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Sitting in my room
Waiting for your call
The atmosphere filled with gloom
I hear no sound, no sign that you're here
Then the tears
Start streaming down

I lie awake in bed tonight
Clinging to your picture tight
I did some things
I now regret
Those horrible things
Yes I regret

At school next day
I see none of you
You gave up...I fear

Please forgive me
I know it's wrong
But I'm stil here...

Waiting
Waiting for you to come home
©2007-2009 ~RR4ever
:iconrr4ever:

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I'm sorry Ky.

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:iconkyphoidfever:
Roo. D=
Please don't be upset.
It's no big deal, okay??


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"History is written by the victor. History is filled with liars...
Because all you need to change the world is one good lie and a river of blood."


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:iconrr4ever:
Ky. D=
And there's other issues I'm upset about....
And I thought about them while I was writing this....
And that story was on the top three things that bothered me....
Sorry. ;~;


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Life is a bitch.....Till she has puppies
:iconghostfur:
That so sad. :c
hey, when you write poems, you should try for a more flowy kinda way with sad poems, where each line just like flows together. :3
I dunno.
I like flow.

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How many times can i b r e a k till I s h a t t e r?
:iconrr4ever:
I know. :c
Cause I'm sad...Just not about the Ky thing...Other, life issues. e____e;;;
...
^^; Thanks, I'll try.


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Life is a bitch.....Till she has puppies
:iconghostfur:
Okay.

Sorry. ._.
Not like I said "God that poem sucks"
Just trying to tell you that I think it would sound better if you made it flow more like a song to express a sadder emotion.

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How many times can i b r e a k till I s h a t t e r?
:iconrr4ever:
D:
I didn't say that. ;;
I meant that I never write poetry....And yeah. D:
I love your advice. <3


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Life is a bitch.....Till she has puppies
:iconghostfur:
Oh, ojkay. o3o;;
Excuse me, I'm blonde.
But yeah, I enjoy writing sad poems,. x3

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How many times can i b r e a k till I s h a t t e r?
:iconrr4ever:
....XD
I have the perfect thing for you. x3
I saw it on my friend Ky's paper. x3
It's "I'm blonode...What's your excuse?" x3
I thought it was hilarious cause it fits her so well. XD


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Life is a bitch.....Till she has puppies
:iconghostfur:
I should get a button that syas that! xDD

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How many times can i b r e a k till I s h a t t e r?

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