Sitting in my room
Waiting for your call
The atmosphere filled with gloom
I hear no sound, no sign that you're here
Then the tears
Start streaming down
I lie awake in bed tonight
Clinging to your picture tight
I did some things
I now regret
Those horrible things
Yes I regret
At school next day
I see none of you
You gave up...I fear
Please forgive me
I know it's wrong
But I'm stil here...
Waiting
Waiting for you to come home













Comments
Please don't be upset.
It's no big deal, okay??
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"History is written by the victor. History is filled with liars...
Because all you need to change the world is one good lie and a river of blood."
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(icon base by *PirateGirl-Tetra)
And there's other issues I'm upset about....
And I thought about them while I was writing this....
And that story was on the top three things that bothered me....
Sorry. ;~;
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Life is a bitch.....Till she has puppies
hey, when you write poems, you should try for a more flowy kinda way with sad poems, where each line just like flows together. :3
I dunno.
I like flow.
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How many times can i b r e a k till I s h a t t e r?
Cause I'm sad...Just not about the Ky thing...Other, life issues. e____e;;;
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Life is a bitch.....Till she has puppies
Sorry. ._.
Not like I said "God that poem sucks"
Just trying to tell you that I think it would sound better if you made it flow more like a song to express a sadder emotion.
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How many times can i b r e a k till I s h a t t e r?
I didn't say that. ;;
I meant that I never write poetry....And yeah. D:
I love your advice. <3
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Life is a bitch.....Till she has puppies
Excuse me, I'm blonde.
But yeah, I enjoy writing sad poems,. x3
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How many times can i b r e a k till I s h a t t e r?
I have the perfect thing for you. x3
I saw it on my friend Ky's paper. x3
It's "I'm blonode...What's your excuse?" x3
I thought it was hilarious cause it fits her so well. XD
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Life is a bitch.....Till she has puppies
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How many times can i b r e a k till I s h a t t e r?
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